It was a damn fine short story. I give you 87%.
The reason you didn't get 100% is because you referenced a shitty ass Ben Stiller/ Robert Deniro movie that shall be kept nameless.
sledg
Tuesday 25 October 2005 at 5:56 pm
that is an awesome story, i give it 4 stars
wispy
Tuesday 25 October 2005 at 5:56 pm
dinosaurs!
sarah c.
Tuesday 25 October 2005 at 5:56 pm
2001, huh? let's see...
dk
Tuesday 25 October 2005 at 5:56 pm
debbie -- no. I changed the year, as well as the names. wouldn't that be awesome though? the real 2001 girlfriend's mom was a fuckin' *fox*.
[e]
Tuesday 25 October 2005 at 5:56 pm
foxes!
sarah c.
Tuesday 25 October 2005 at 5:56 pm
COXXES!
Jerrl
Tuesday 25 October 2005 at 5:56 pm
ok, i didn't think so, but... that would have been something.
dk
Tuesday 25 October 2005 at 5:56 pm

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